Camerawork
The camerawork for this task was quite successful. My group used a range of shots including: long shots, mid shots, medium shots and close-up. An example of a effective mid shot in the video is:
This shot also shows the angles we used as well as the movement in the video. Some of the movement was a bit slow for moving with Libby's movements and next time we do follow the movements of a person we will make sure the camera person has a better reaction time. The angles are not varied and are the same angle in most of the shots. Most of the shots are steady but there are some shots that are a bit shaky in areas. To improve this we will make sure the camera is steady or is in a environment that will make sure the camera stays steady. Most of the framing is good but there are some shots like the one above that cuts off a part of the person in focus. To improve we will make sure the camera person knows where the person is going and can do the shot without cutting off the persons head.
Editing

The editing for this task was also quite successful. My group stuck to the
180 degree rule all through the video and we also used effective
match-on-action through the door scene. The shot reverse shot we used was
pretty good but it may not have been completely clear so we could improve by
making sure it is clearer that the conversation is taking place. The continuity
in the video is pretty good but some areas could be improved by making sure the
props don't suddenly move hand or that random new hand gestures or body
movements appear that weren't in the previous shot. We used visual effects
quite effectively and the only improvement I would suggest making is making the
freeze frames a bit quicker then we used in the prelim task. Our use of titles
could be improved by knowing where would be the best place to put them in is.
You have created a successful prelim Becky - you use a good range of shots in the task and have edited it effectively - good!
ReplyDeleteYour prelim shows proficient skills - grade C. Focus on ensuring framing is a little better (some shots cut off the top of Libby's head) and lighting / lighting sources - try to avoid too many dark shots.
You reflect on your work effectively, using terminology accurately. You could have given a bit more detailed analysis on each shot, commenting on camerawork / angle / movement, composition / framing, editing and mise-en-0scene - evaluate each of these factors. Now see how you can develop these skills in your thriller.